Black Poetry : nights corus

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Nov 21, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nerve endings set on edge
    by the words that jumped from
    ur vocal cords and held me,
    that night under the moon,
    i blossumed and knew love
    for the first tyme, the clouds
    saturated under ur skin making
    u as light as slow breathing after
    an earthshattering orgasm,
    in....
    out....
    in....
    out...
    relax....
    ur touch made 130 degrees feel cold......

    i let the rain that "pitter" "pattered" outside
    my window wash my sin away....
    u opened the door to of my soul
    and i wasn't afraid when u touched me....
    there.....

    instead i just counted the spots
    on the ceiling,
    1....
    2....
    3....
    150 spots later....
    i counted the dots in your iris
    only to become intralled
    in mental erections that
    glistened off the moons
    ecipse
    and ended in your eys,
    till the sun dawned
    on us and we waited
    untill night fell again
    ....

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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the way u laid dis out
    very smoothly and tyteeeeeeeeeee!!
    flow on sistah
     
  3. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    this was tight. keep it coming

    Roni
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall, glad u liked it,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was hot!

    :uhoh: Watch out now!
    Pretty dang hot up in here!
    Nice spicy flow...xpress your self...experience life safely and timely!

    Blessings on Your House!
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed it was hot....
    flow on....:angel1:
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for replyin yall,
    much love family,
    -story
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the beauty of the abstract...

    Love when you take me on these psychedelic journeys
    of passion, romance...lovemaking and splendor...

    counting the dots on ceiling and in his iris...
    ending in his eyes...

    Girl....love your style!
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    holy crap! story, you have some of the best lines I've read in a long while. you have so much talent, girl! love to read ya.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    my goodness
    you are indeed
    deep
    you have
    your own kind of flair
    very creative
    very deep
    nice
    Peace
     
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