Black Poetry : Night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by serenti-poet, Aug 25, 2003.

  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Night fell into my room

    and he held me in his arms

    And he closed his eyes and shook his head

    And took me away from harm

    Soaring high-

    Not to moan or cry, we flew into the stars

    Not knowing were we were headed

    As long as it was far

    He took me to see rainbows

    Of planets not yet known

    We danced upon the Milky Way

    Like the universe was our own

    Then everything was quite

    And I knew that I was home

    In my bed, half asleep

    Once again

    Alone
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving the form...

    Lovin' your content!!! :heart:
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked that
     
  4. SeXiAzzMahMi

    SeXiAzzMahMi Banned

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    Wow i love that...

    Made me feel like i was on this wonderful journey...

    almost like i was a little gurl have great fun...

    Thank u...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u mastered my domain above
    and in my arm was this love
    this was so beautiful and warm
    now sleep til dawn ....
    tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Sereneti...i love that ya back cause this had me floatin and then the end...I felt ya emotion my sista for real.
    Beautiful and yet I am NOT surprised :)
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, Serenti......I was all wrapped up in the romance and then
    you woke me up...

    this was beautiful and emotionally captivating!
     
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    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This just seemed beautiful. Something very serene about it. Nice write.
     
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    i really like this one
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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