Quiet Poetry Lounge : Night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by serenti-poet, Aug 25, 2003.

  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Night fell into my room

    and he held me in his arms

    And he closed his eyes and shook his head

    And took me away from harm

    Soaring high-

    Not to moan or cry, we flew into the stars

    Not knowing were we were headed

    As long as it was far

    He took me to see rainbows

    Of planets not yet known

    We danced upon the Milky Way

    Like the universe was our own

    Then everything was quite

    And I knew that I was home

    In my bed, half asleep

    Once again

    Alone
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know hopw i feel about dis ....
    u are a master in flow u been missed
    happy to be reading u again !
    wow..................
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree...its always a blessing to read serenti :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ya'll I'm blushing
     
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    gurl i'm smiling too
    woooooweeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i missed you girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    very nice poem :)
     
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    yeah i must agree your poem was very nice
     
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    very nice
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ya'll
     
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