Black Poetry : night time...writes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Jan 4, 2002.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...sleep has not paid a visit...
    --------------------------------------------

    my face displays a
    dusty glow from the
    illuminating screen of
    this release mechanism…

    this laptop catches
    particle being project
    from my cranial cavity

    …and i think on the
    you that affects my
    mind at this hour
    when others find
    peace…serenity
    among their sheets…
    atop spring mattresses…
    or atop pleasure mounds
    of human flesh

    oh yes…

    yet…i am awake

    you are poring
    my…outer limits
    for easy access to
    my souls midnight
    hide-out…
    its resting place

    i give up
    for i am ready
    for…the
    invasion…
    you may
    occupy my
    presence…

    laying horizontal
    my arms are raised
    above my “mind”
    as my leg create the
    “door”
    your “key” fits the
    “lock”

    and you enter…

    MsDLite (c) 01.02
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh!!!

    in da weeee hours i sit alone from da
    deep depth of my beings and watch
    the dem light glow as i write while
    da house sleep in comfort of bedding
    or mounded on top of fleash
    yet we see and turn heads
    but if u read
    i'll enter...........love this couldn't help self !:heart: :kiss:
     
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    peace and serenity

    among the sheets escape me, once again...but I knew where I could find another child of the night....

    "pleasure mounds of human flesh"....(pleeeeez!)

    and then....there's this luscious piece a...

    "you are poring
    my…outer limits
    for easy access to
    my souls midnight
    hide-out…
    its resting place"



    oh yea...a sista knew where to come in the midnight hour!

    a
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurrrl, this piece is quite nyce. there are so many tyght lines in this piece that it just wouldn't be fair to name just one, dear friend. very well done.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GET SOME SLEEP :wink: :sleep: :sleep:

    tight scribe from the midnight hour...
     
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    Thanks!

    You could have been sleep
    instead you stayed up late
    last night so that I can get
    blessed by the beautiful words
    you speak.
    Thank you.
    Rest child...:)
     
  7. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a woman's work is never done

    a writer's mind is never sleep...
    MSD you deliver my sweetness!
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. D

    You str8 laid this one out ma... Im lovin it!

    Reas
     
  9. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) AW YEAH!

    Sista, you flowin like the Niagra!!! Please keep it comin
     
  10. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my poets--my poets!

    midnight blanketed me...
    so much so that my eyes
    my mind...heart and
    soul were wide awake...

    so, i shared the experience
    with you...as i saw it
    and it was good...

    to the poets...you inspire me
    $R...
    sherykah
    A~
    LISTER
    d~
    Rashad
    Mr M~
    Reason
    Danilyn


    love y'all...from way deep
    down...

    tonight, i sleep~
     
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