Quiet Poetry Lounge : Night Terrors

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Nov 8, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay...you touched me with this one too. You get a standing ovation
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off da hook sista this one was fly !

    every nightmare is displayed from the inner vision deep sleep
    it's the dreary eyez whom so end or keep it alive................
     
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    Your words sent chills down my spine, as I was captured within the claws of the terror which refuses to release its grip. The thought of this is enough to make one's bones quiver. But even something this frightening, holds no weight against the one who sits on high. Just when you have given up hope, he holds you securely all the more. I feel you, so, so deeply here sis. Peace be still.
     
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    real nice flow angelicsage...wonderful sense of terror and fear
    ...as i read i kept hearing in my head a passage from Frank Herberts
    original book DUNE....not the followup books...the original..and in the hardcopy (that i had) on page l9 it says "fear is the mind killer, fear is the little death that brings about total obliteration....I must face my fear, turn and look at it and where it was nothing will remain only i will remain"
    so I will believe since you looked at it that your nitemares will turn into beautiful dreams...that will calm you and give you peace..
     
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    bring on pt.2 sista i'm loving this splash u got me in poeticly wow !!!!
    sage dis was off da hook pt.2 please...............................................
     
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    :welldone: oh i got the chills sis this was a awesome write i think you din out did yourself once more....this was tight ya had me in this from top to bottom

    peace
    Angel
     
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    Sister, sister, sister, how you bring me so close into the words every single time is beyond me. You weave it together so beautifully, so imaginitively, you capture me hook line and sinker every single time. Much love, sweetie.
     
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