Black Poetry : night terrors

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Feb 19, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm still awake
    because
    night terrors
    are a *****
    and i'm sure
    i'll have another
    bed dream
    if i give in
    to my body
    cuz i haven't
    the mind
    to control
    what's in my heart
    never can
    keep myself
    from feeling
    what i felt
    when we more
    than fondled
    fragile wishes
    "just like yesterday"
    and when
    i feel
    those sensations
    i know
    i need to resist
    the urge to
    close my eyes
    fall into
    your arms
    move between
    the warmth
    inside
    your smooth thighs
    feel our heat
    again
    taste our tears
    again
    be alive
    for real
    again
    cuz
    i won't apologize
    for who/how/what
    i am
    in the morning
    if i wake
    up
    from another
    bed dream...


    alyce, 2001
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    if you need me to go to sleep for you ...

    haaaay ... just let me know gurl!

    whew ... tight peace Alyce

    :)
     
  3. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tossin and Turnin

    I was twisted in the sheets reading this one--very descriptive of a reality we all know--Ra
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm missing you... I mean your flows. :wink:

    Think that's why I had another "bed" dream. :D

    Where u @?

    Saleem
     
  5. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second these emotions, Miss A!

    {whispering to "dwarf":
    I'm not apologizing, either!

    "fuzzy"} :)


    Gaylee
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whenever I read you... :)

    Bert
     
  7. smilin_dwarf

    smilin_dwarf Active Member MEMBER

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    Well, you have done it yet again, touched my soul. In the process you have unfortunately also brought a tear to my eye. Thank you for sharing.
    And to Gaylee, big ol' rasberry, lol.
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    a dreaming keeps a little spice or it could be longing for something different. it's up to the person to be happy
    so which is it?

    feeling ya alyce
    takes one to know one

    DSS
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Back in stride!

    Now that was an interesting flow--I didn't see it coming until I thought about it for a while--this was tight and extremely readable and accessible--well done--as usual--Ra

    :heart:
     
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