Black Poetry : Night Lights

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by fade, Oct 1, 2004.

  1. fade

    fade Member MEMBER

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    NIGHT LIGHTS


    SUNLIGHT, MOONLIGHT, WHY IS IT SO HARD FOR ME TO FIND MY PRINCE AT NIGHT?

    DADDY YOU ALWAYS REFER TO ME AS A PRINCESS, SO TELL ME DADDY WHY CAN’T I FIND MY PRINCE THAT IS RIGHT FOR ME?

    IS THERE SOMETHING WRONG WITH ME THAT I’M NOT TRYING TO SEE?
    NO BABY GIRL IT’S NOTHING WRONG WITH YOU, IT’S SOMETHING WRONG WITH THEM THEY ARE THE ONES THAT’S NOT TRYING TO SEE.

    SUNLIGHT, MOONLIGHT, WHY IS IT SO HARD FOR ME TO FIND MY PRINCE AT NIGHT?

    BABY GIRL IF YOUR PRICE AT NIGHT DON’T COME DON’T WORRY CAUSE I WILL ALWAYS BE YOUR DADDY YOUR KNIGHT AND SHINING KING AT NIGHT, THAT OVER POWERS THE PRINCE AT NIGHT, SO BABY GIRL STOP LOOKING DOWN THAT SHADY PATH AT NIGHT, BECAUSE MAYBE JUST MAYBE THOSE DEMISIHING LIGHTS IS NOT MADE FOR YOUR PRETTY SIGHT.

    SUNLIGHT, MOONLIGHT, DADDY I UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO SAY, BUT IS IT SO WORNG FOR ME TO WANT MY OWN, MY VERY OWN PRINCE AT NIGHT?

    NO IT’S NOT WRONG MY LITTLE PRINCESS AND I HOPE YOU FIND YOUR PRINCE AT NIGHT.

    THANKS DADDY………​
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice drop, and weeelcooome
     
  3. Khasm13

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    welcome poet to da land of poetic bliss...
    neva be afraid to drop your flow...day or night sis...
    we are all looking for that special one at night...
    be patient and things will be aiight...tyte flo
    one love
    khasm
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destees!!! Very nice drop:)
     
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    Welcome poet@ baby girl, please don't fade into the night

    Rather, make this your home.
     
  6. fade

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    Thank U

    Fade,
     
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    Thank U 4 the replies and making me feel welcome.
     
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    Thanks :rain:



























    jee





    no ....

    i feel him now..




    aww mis him now my dad.....





    This was a nice poem Poet ..

    thank you...


    keep writting..



    and welcome to destee..





    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  9. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as a father I can appreciated the message in this piece.
    it's very encouraging to see a daughter that appreciates
    the role her father plays in her life.

    I'm sure he's proud

    NittyGritt
     
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    very nice drop posed well..thanks for sharing
     
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