Black Poetry : Night Heats

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 8, 2005.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the night falls.
    Twisting bodies in chorus.
    Singing love serenades in the wind.

    A soft rain falls on my back
    as we pause to cover up
    in the sheet were in.

    Yes were outside rolling in the backyard
    like were strolling thru memories we have taken before.

    Deep inside your body, you’re deep inside my heart.
    Like one intertwined song.
    I take the top; let you have it
    for we know the stars above.

    Each one twinkles like a diamond as we explore.
    I kiss your lips… as you try to say a word,
    sharing only silences were two loving soaring birds.
    It’s a camp out love night summer;
    a soft wind blows and keeps us cool.
    No thoughts of work, of troubles birth.
    No day time no limit.
     
  2. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go hodee,
    Go hodee!
    :insane: Heat nights hunh? My o my.. what a wonderful poem.. well put!
    Go hodee!
    Go hodee!
     
  3. Bluewater

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    HI Hodee
    wow..Hodee
    This was very deep,
    Very sensual
    and lovely....
    Flow on!!

    Peace
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats was hot for real
    Man why didnt I write that lol
    Much love poet
    Flow On
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaa! night heat of compassion and compromises
    love the fire of this flame........................................................
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to bro hodee

    let me tell ya when the night falls
    i'm gonna have you crawl

    to whats between my legs
    there's no need for you to beg

    i'm gonna give it you just the way you like
    tonight it's you don't worry about ronnie, ricki, bobby,or mike

    just think of me as the new edition
    i let you slide in my escapade on one condition

    let the night covers us don't worry who's around
    you can xplore what's downtown

    uptown where ever you want to go
    we can do the freaky things noone has to know

    how i make you lose control
    love how you lapping my love up as if it was gold

    hodee i think it's time that you discover
    how we was made for another

    as you slip into the darkness
    softly moaning as you caress

    all that's soft and wet
    your telling me what's next

    as the night covers us from prying eyes
    you rubbing on my caramel thighs

    i'm feeling ya as our bodies form a rhyme
    slow motion baby as i driving you out of your mind

    on how this southern girl got you in this mix
    how you have to come to me to get your fix

    just to make it through the day
    just want to let you know you can come around my way

    this late night heat has me soaking wet
    baby once we finished hopefully there won't be any regrets

    on how we made passionate love into the Nights Heats


    this for you hodee from the ga. peach who's keeping it sweet
    Nevar
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well now Hodee, that was one sultry carefree romp. Do your thang brotha...whew.
     
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    QQ Look at hodee bear gettin all romantically mushy *giggles*

    thats so sweet you kiss her when she try to speak

    hopefully if she know whats good for her she'll kiss you when you try to sing lolol j/k brotha (not really) LOL

    great write ;) :)
     
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