Black Poetry : night art...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Feb 12, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with a broad stoke
    the charcoal blackness
    of the night covers the
    auburn streaks of the
    sun's evening sleep
    sprinkles of glittering
    starlights fall randomly into
    predestine places creating
    art upon art...
    a northern breeze
    moves orphaned clouds
    as their grayness adds contrast
    to this picturesque collage of
    nightly peace and serenity
    the chalk white moon
    drops in like a far of beacon
    summonsing its "prey"...

    we bask in the beauty
    of the natural art just outside
    our window...
    our hands clasped in
    intimate reassurance...
    our bodies are drawn
    nigh as we except each others
    embrace...
    we succumb to the moon
    and are consumed in the
    moment in which
    the night art creates...

    MsDLite (c) 02.01
     
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    dliteful....

    ...as usual. way to lay the setting for a beautiful evening of artful appreciation of nature's evening glow. MsDlite, i'm waiting for you under the window sill.

    foreva love
     
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    "...Our hands clasped in intimate reassurance"

    Help me up off the floor please.
    BE
     
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    I'm loving this MsD......Very much so as always....
     
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    once again, you render me speechless...! this is a master work MsD! and I feel what you're saying! EVERY LINE! :)

    A
     
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    with fine delicate precise strokes
    you paint the picture

    so gifted MsDLite

    nuth'n but peace
     
  7. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...to my poetic family

    ...you encourage me...
    keep me focused...
    accept me and my poetry...

    thanks sooo much!! :)

    love ya'll!
     
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    i just love reading the poems

    the content and poetic style
    go hand in hand ^5
    on this tight flow

    ~keep flowin' MsD
     
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    Love...

    the way you worked this one.It was really nice.
     
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    This piece is mesmerizingly beautiful! Deep expressions with a deep visual!

    Stay focused,

    Ujima
     
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