Black Poetry : Nici

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kind of inspired by Khasm's dealin' with jane
    and my current struggles with the beast, Nicotine(and assorted chemicals and toxins now in ciggarettes)

    I ain't even mad...
    can't be mad atcha, nici
    I mean
    you gotta be you
    And there's a whole world out
    there for you to be you...
    and me?
    well it's gotta be the same
    for me
    except I refuse ill will
    and reject malice
    I mean you know
    let's be real
    we've been knowin' each other
    for a good long while now
    and it's all too clear
    to me that you just want to do me in
    oh let me count the ways
    oh where would I begin
    or better yet
    let me not..
    see nici...
    we both know you don't love me
    we both know how your only aim
    is to destroy me
    you know you'd rather see me die
    than to see me fly(like P say)
    and I'll even take the blame
    for lettin' that dog bite me twice
    shame on me, right?
    ok
    it's all good
    now with a million puncture wounds
    in my guts I'm tryin to be rabie free
    see I ain't mad atcha nici
    I just want to hold on to my throat
    you feel me? hold on to my lungs
    I kind of use those to breathe and stuff
    I want to be cancer free
    things you simply ain't interested in
    and I'm like that's your choice
    that's your voice
    and I simply want to keep mine
    so if it's a crime in your eyes nici
    than I'll just be the bad guy
    takin that deep breath
    just before I bid you
    goodbye

    (c)05/03 Michael
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy baby if you are tryin' to quit smoking
    I applaud your efforts(ain't no joke).
    let me know in anyway I may be of support.
    and you CAN do it if you want to, one way
    or another...
    Much love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flow dis was off the hook
    keep da ink dropping
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Rich.
    Peace to ya!
     
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    This piece could inspire a lot of people to quit. Tyte Skrybe7
     
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    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah,trying to quit...

    I feel this poem could relate to everything that feels so good but is oh so bad for you.
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah, purple moons - you get the idea.
    Peace to ya!


    Lahana Mysteria- I dig this name. I guess it is
    what the reader decides it is. So long as
    it is on the same planet of my original meaning
    I'm a happy writer so, thanx and much love!
     
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    I hear you loud and clear Mon Capitan!

    Been there done that, now asthmatic ain't that a trick!
    Do what you got to do and hang on in there!

    Blessings On Ya House!:toast:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol I feel ya msluciousb. I probably should be
    asthmatic. Thanx for the moral support there!
    doin' what I gotta do.
    Peace to ya!
     
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