Black Poetry : "...next to the sun" (prelude thought)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    light parts from your lips
    as you kiss me.. exposing
    aerial thoughts
    seeking ground..
    you have found- me
    from
    ninety- three
    million miles
    with
    your smile
    your
    walk-
    simply your style..
    ~cyclic pathways~
    your
    heart is so absorbent
    to my being
    that you are my energy
    & force
    given by God as a soon-to-be wife
    my source of life...

    next to the sun





    @cdlm
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh sweet poetry

    and very nicely written.
    always good to read you.


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as you know your presence says it all!!
    thanx cocobutterskyn.


    angelicsage&jh version next!!
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "My Poetic Reflection"...

    You never cease to amaze me...

    or sweep me off my poetic feet...

    As always...this was soooo beautiful... :crying: :cry: :crying:

    Can't wait for the next version...

    Flow on my dearest brother...let it flow...
     
  5. PurpleMoons

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    That is so beautiful!
    Makes my heart go..... Awwww!
    Feeling the love in this piece!
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    Beautiful Jehiah.....
    Lovin it all the way :thanks:
     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If this is just the prelude......

    This here is the tyteness.
    So full of motion and scenery!
    Boy, your pen is touched by God!!!!!

    Mo' flows, Mo flows!

    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely flow
    enjoyed it
    continue on
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa j'hiah, this is so beautiful. Great to read you again, my friend.
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I echo the above words of praise, this was just simply beautiful.
     
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