Black Poetry : "Next" Time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Feb 21, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i need to rehearse

    so my fortunes will reverse

    i'm living under a curse

    that says i'll never be a girls heart nurse

    my romantic life was put in a hearse

    long before i tried to get into her purse

    to get some funds to re-emburse

    my heart. but he got there first

    so i continue to thirst

    for Coca Cola or Pepsi. Nothing is worse

    than being alone



    love,

    howard
     
  2. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so touching
    i really enjoy reading you.
     
  3. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE DROP CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow howard you sure have a unique style of writing. flow on poet.:love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done poet
     
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    dAM POET
    Now that was sickly twisted
    I felt that piece
    Much Love Poet
     
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