Black Poetry : next time

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...
    next time you shoot a smile my way
    warm enough to melt winter into spring
    even as summer turns to fall
    I won't be so distracted
    hopin' I won't have my head stuck
    in the cosmos
    in the micro epic battles
    of bliss and bliss
    oblivion and enlightenment
    ignorance and understanding
    where I feel I float endlessly
    to divine currents spanning
    space and time
    yeah next time...
    when you cut those pretty eyes
    at me so knowingly
    sending me volumes of
    intention and emotion
    enough ice breakin' to crack glaciers
    I won't be so cold on the
    trail of clues leading my sight
    straight to you
    off somewhere where
    all leads seem to end
    or never begin
    see
    I'm hopin the next times
    I'll be in a ready frame of mind
    you know
    like inclined to return notion
    with a gesture or motion of my own
    yeah next time...
    next time I'll say hi
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...very nice
    next time
    yes say Hi
    lovely
    i really like this
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooo, love the rich analogies and language. So nicely put together.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh man!! this is so tyte, so beautiful, so just man... i love it!
     
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