Black Poetry : Next Time Maybe ...? By Dúbb'l yoo T

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  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    If I was to
    Walk away after
    Asking you this question,
    Would you come after me?

    Well, young gentleman
    That depends on
    What the question is
    That you will be asking me?

    If I walked away,
    After our time now,
    What would be
    Your last memory of me?

    My last memory…
    Would be the way
    You effortlessly commanded my
    Attention from me.

    The way the back stroke motion of hand
    Caused internal quivers,
    And I was yet to turn
    Before your eyes to see.

    And then your embrace of gaze towards
    Me…

    You want me.

    And I would give you me instantly
    In this prefect moment but you see…

    My man is standing a distance behind you
    Watching us
    Through the expression of me.
    Next time maybe …?
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite the eloquent brush off. Such a well posed piece, poet.
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    waynethomas:
    Very nice piece. I really enjoyed the read.
     
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