Black Poetry : Next Time I See You (Journey to the Platform Part II)

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  1. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Next Time I See You (Journey to the Platform Part II)

    You got me on this platform looking’ deep into your eyes
    From the moment I first saw you I knew it wasn’t a disguise
    or mask you were putting on…because you’ve always come with the truth
    Our time is short now but guess what’s gonna happen the next time I see you?

    The next time I see you there will be no hesitation on my part.
    I’m gonna put it down in style like a beautiful work of art.
    I’ll be the painter and you’ll be my canvas…blank and ready for my design.
    Won’t be no frontin’ or time delays because you’ll be at the front of the line.

    You always treat me like a Queen and make me feel just right
    So tonight it’s all about you my love and don’t worry I won’t bite (on second thought I just might)
    I’ll start with a long, hot, steamy bath to take away your stress
    Only after I strip you slowly because it’s you I love to undress

    Sponge you down from head to toe taking delicate care of everything in between
    By the time I get done with you my love you’ll be…so fresh and so clean
    I’ll help you out of the bath and towel-dry you slowly inch by inch
    Looking at your wonderful nakedness I can’t help but steal a pinch

    Now that you are relaxed I lead you to our cave
    Lay you on your back and baptize you with warm oil...turning you into my love slave
    I massage you from your broad shoulders all the way to your strong manhood
    The response I get from your lovely member tells me everything is all good

    I begin to stroke you slowly…up and down and round and round
    The look on your face tells me you’re enjoying the moment and your moans are the sweetest sounds
    Boy, I’m so tempted to climb on top and surround you with my wet love canal
    But I promised you that tonight was your night so proceed we shall

    The tongue is such a wonderful and blessed member of the body
    Offering so many ways to force out the most sensual melody
    Licking, sucking, savoring and teasing just to be mean
    I have no other choice but to give him all I’ve got to show him just who is the Queen

    He’s shaking and squirming in ecstasy because I’m serving him up with good taste
    But I lose my cool and climb on top ‘cause I just can’t let a good one go to waste
    As I ride my stallion into the night I can see the settling of the morning dew
    Best believe all of this is going down the next time I see you.
     
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    Ain't no doubt i'm coming in on da next train
    to a sensual love my heart gotta claim
    for the same face i will show, as i plant my feet to da floor

    On da platform is where i be ready to get next to thee
    hot shower bubble bath in return as i swoosh wit class
    bring warm deep desires to put out ya sensual fire
    as we waste no time to a delightful bliss of mines

    In reverse as we twist & turn give ya body all that it yearns
    from da blazzin of my tongue lickin u from head to toe
    cross da center deep and more as i reach da depth of ya core
    then u buck twist & moan as i go deeper and strong
    love is now pron to the feast of treat and melody sound
    from da smackin as i round da mound

    Now da true ecstasy rise as my passion start to mesmerise
    wwit a hypnotic flava that our minds can savior the next time
    we meet on da platform.....oooops !

    Thought u was talking bout me ...........hehehehehehe!!!
    this was hot tasty and full of flava
     
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    The detail in this was wonderful, excellent word choice. Instead of frequent flyer miles, he'll have frequent track miles, lol. I see Rich already has his ticket to ride. Great write!
     
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    $$Rich$$
    Awe man, is it my turn already?
    If that''s the case all I ask is that you take it slow and steady!
    Prime me and tease me as long as you like in the foreplay(ground)
    Taking me into ecstasy as you spin my world round and round
    I don't wanna miss one second of that blazin' tongue you got
    I'll be the one in the trench coat and stilletto's 'cause that platform is gonna be HOT!!!!!

    Sis. Watz: I couldn't just let it end at the platform...just would not have been right!!! LOL Thank you for the love
     
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    yea

    treating a Queen like you right
    once ain't good enough
    i wish i could do it twice
    do it all over in another life
    lay my life on the line
    pay the ultimate price

    back at the black cave
    i'm finding it real hard to behave
    totally amazed
    but ready to satisfy the cravin'
    misbehavin'

    may end up with a squirm
    but show some concern
    you about to learn
    it's on now that it's my turn
     
  6. LovesDestiny

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    Ok DSS, bring it on my King!
    I can handle what ya got...believe me it ain't no thing but a chicken wing!
    You talkin' the right stuff and seem to have memorized your lines right.
    But you gotta really step up to the plate...so what else you got?

    One thing you got right is that once is never enough
    And when you come again be ready to bring it nice and rough...
    When we in the black cave don't worry about bein' on your best behavior
    'cause what goes down in the dark is exactly what I savor!

    So since you say you got somethin' to teach
    I'm all ears and ready for the speech...
    better yet just take me to the beach in the moonlight of the night
    'Cause it's all good on the water and your life will be ALRIGHT!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    so

    you want me to bring on a street level
    met up with the street rebel
    trying to reach God and duck the devil
    hand and hand wit you once the dust settle

    bring it to the plate?
    mmmm very tasty
    was that chicken i just ate?
    no wait i know that taste
    was that chocolate cake?
    or a real real tender piece of steak?

    make love to the mind and watch the body melt
    hard to control yourself
    Romance the romantic
    Can you understand it?
    At the platform ain’t about to leave you stranded
    This is a chance meeting but don’t call it random
     
  8. LovesDestiny

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    LOL...DSS you really got me crackin' up!
    I could use a drink right now so go head and fill my cup...
    Not sure what you ate 'cause the taste is never the same
    What's for sure is that its juicy and tender...hot off the fiery flame.

    It will definitely be a challenge but the Romantic can be romanced
    Just step out of your comfort zone and take a chance
    I overstand it...more than you can ever know
    I'll be at the platform with bells on waiting for the show
     
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    I see u there dressed sweet
    lips of beauty what a treat
    at da platform in da trench
    as i near for what maybe french
    but as hot as i feel
    there be a fire blazzin on da real
    KC windy is lookin cross from a far
    wondering waiting wit a single rose
    what i have will make something start
    and it will caress ya and take ya heart
    at da platform
     
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    Hi Sister HopelisRomantic
    This is a wonderful poetic story
    Wow! I really enjoyed this here
    Keeping it coming sis

    Peace~N~Love
     
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