Quiet Poetry Lounge : next life time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, Oct 12, 2004.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'Now what am I
    supposed to do
    when i want you in my world?
    And how
    can I want u for myself
    when I'm already someone's
    G-u-u-r-r-L!'


    Erykah speaks my mind
    Solutions I cant find
    He is beautiful y'all
    But I cant give my all
    So divine, so sublime
    I dont wanna wait the next life time!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    reach for that love
    hold it tyte coz dis
    alright i know u belong
    can u here it in da song
    coz by next life time
    one be hard to fine
    so make ya stand gurl
    go get dat man !
    and if he won't do call
    above and i'll come to u .

    lovely flow i really like this flow..........
     
  3. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    In hopes of a next life time
    I left my heart standing at heartbreaks stoop
    I told it to await for relief
    but relief never came to pass.
    now what am I supposed to do?

    Loved your piece, and love the song.
    the answer is inside of you. :drink:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so feelin ya. Dig this piece, and nice to see ya back.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    had to bring this one back it was so sweetly laid out poeticly
     
  6. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    next lifetime seemed too far
    so i ceased the moment
    and now beauty reigns in my heart!
    the sublime being now a part of my own
    loving has never felt so good, so right!
    boy have i got me a good thing going
    and to think i was about to let it pass me by
    now poet Caesarlee, heartbreak wont be
    a thing to worry about for now
    i done passes the hardest part
    i am ravishing in the light of love

    Rich, I did take the opportunity,
    found me the courage,
    help came from above
    and now i feel the Richness
    of the strongest emotion
    ever felt!

    Thanks for bringing this one back!

    Blessings to u all!
     
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