Black Poetry : Newly Re-modeled Heaven

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are angels
    and then
    there are those angels
    that fell from the
    grace of men--
    those that live on this
    side of heaven and can't
    escape the
    persistence of perspiration
    and blood
    reeking of conflict, desire, & lust
    but the acrid smoke that
    curls up into billowing dust
    clouds our view then
    winds itself around silver
    streamers of light
    that leads the lost
    back upstairs towards
    that newly re-modeled heaven
    where more rooms
    have been added on
    for those who thought
    sure they could touch
    the tips of bright stars
    reaching tirelessly
    for their diamond-points
    of light
    and pulled up madness
    by the roots instead




    (c) FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
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    Giovanni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful piece.. I'ma check your next piece..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeee! heavens bright doors

    dis was beautiful and very heavenly.....do tell me more:)
     
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    Giovanni

    Hey.......thanx 4 pointin' out whatcha' like here! :)

    Thanx also for read'n

    N2
     
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    I'm glad you enjoyed the read.....:D Thank you brotha!! :D


    Always :heart:

    N2
     
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