Black Poetry : Newcomer w/ some poetry to share

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by chaos, Nov 13, 2003.

  1. chaos

    chaos Member MEMBER

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    Hello everyone! I want to share my most recent poem. Hope you enjoy!

    Fate must be the reason
    We can gape at the incandescent sun
    With no worry of silent eyes
    Or clouds masking it

    Destiny must play a part
    Of a meticulous matchmaker
    Because our souls conjoin too well
    For us to still be mortal

    Karma has to be relied upon
    For this venture to be so flourishing
    After years of dubious ties
    This union feels so sure

    The creator must be the motive
    We smile in this afflicted world
    We are given happiness
    And never allowing one to obtain it

    Now, we are rising to our purpose
    Enveloped in our fortune
    Immersed in our joy
    A love that will always exist

    A destined love that will always exist
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow:) thanks4 sharing:wave:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey:wave:
    thanks for sharing...
    nice read...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya make it sound oh so beautiful :)
    I can only smile :)
     
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    nice flow...
    please drop more...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Very Nice ...Destiny and Fate does play it's part well.
     
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    Chaos ... Welcome Welcome Welcome :wave:

    Very nice poetry, thank you for joining us and sharing! We have our Teen Workshop tonight @ 7 pm ET in our voice chat room. You are welcome to join the other teenagers from the Family there, discussing issues that face you all, encouraging each other. Poetry ThrowDown is tonight too, @ 8 pm ET, so stay for that as well!

    Please make yourself at home, because you are.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Feel'n all of It...

    I am so glad that I joined this club...that was both deep and inspirational....keep it flowing..... :love: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: welcome. im feelin dis
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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