Black Poetry : Newbie here! "Tell ME Does This Make any Sense?"

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  1. shygurl88

    shygurl88 New Member MEMBER

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    Tell me does this make any sense?

    Yo, How can i say this?....
    Since a lil kid, I lived to see you smile
    silly as i was i never forgot that last hug
    the art we shared was treasured as a memory
    to forget you would have been my felony, even in
    florida remembering was simply an essence in the evening,
    believing, that I will soon come back and around you
    i could elapse,sippin koolaid with nothing to say getting ****** up and dirrty all day. ive missed you boy, for some odd reason i just cant say. My every intentions at times is to tell you how i feel, looking into your eyes you turn away,I'm left confused and wordless scared to talk. I must then get away, afraid to say, what i must, only to you i feel this way. To my girls im different when i get around you im soft, im ready to fall off, my dreams are far but i feel our friendship is even farther. I dont know what this means to you or if it has any meaning at all but here are my thoughts after all. My emotions towards you get even harder to express, even if it takes time to do the rest, thinking without you here would cause so much stress. I feel casted to the other side, alone is where i reside...We need time to chill, time to kill, i just wanna talk with you lets keep **** real...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love
    as i come from above to bless this flow

    words of reality scribe in ya vibe ...tyte :spinn:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yeah it makes sense...
    hit us with some more...
    i'll be wait'n
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow cant wait for more
     
  5. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    honey I think we all have felt that way at some point
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Welocme to the family :)
    hearing you clear
    on this here flow
    please do share more
    Peace
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Does it make sense?? what kind of silly question is that. It makes plenty sense....I like it too! Welcome to Destee.com....
     
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