Black Poetry : New

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Cindy, May 21, 2005.

  1. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't look at me with old eyes
    Seeing me like you're used to
    But look at me with new
    For a new life is in our horizon

    So, close your eyes for just a minute
    And clear your mind of torment
    Open your heart from inside out
    And breath a minute or two

    Open them now
    And see before you a new woman
    One with a open heart
    And a new soul

    See before you a woman who
    Lives for putting all right
    And taking previous hurts away
    See one that would never hurt you

    See one who puts your dreams
    Within her fingertips
    And rises in the morning
    With a song in her heart

    A song of you
    The heart of you
    A song with the sound of your laughter
    And the feel of your touch

    See how she revels in your light
    And how it makes her possitively glow
    For the love she gives
    Is for you alone and encompasses two

    So, close your eyes just for a minute
    And dream your wildest dream
    Of life with smiles and happiness
    That could last your whole life through

    Let us be new
    Without the past
    To cloud our new awakening
    For the day is new like me and you

    And love resides where it is welcome
    But the past is thunderstorms
    And never ending rain
    That can only wash away new dreams

    Look me as if you're a blind man
    Who has just regained his sight
    And look with a heart full of pride
    For I am only here for you
     
  2. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy, this is a very nice write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done cindy ya pen really flowz
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome piece poet, I'm in sync with you, as for my love...
    everytime you blink...see a new me, for every second of the day, I grow anew.
    I like the flow of this, thanks
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes it's difficult to believe that someone can change, but indeed it is possible. Your words make the reader pay close attention. Do keep flowing poet.
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy,
    this was beautiful. all i can say...

    :heart: moham
     
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    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If only we could see all through the eyes of the blind, fresh and new.
    Change is wonderful and we are all capable.
    Nice flow my poet
    I felt and thought about it all as I read along
    flow on
     
  8. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow

    I've never felt a piece so deep!You give me a new reason to believe that love belongs to our world,not to gods!Love ain't a myth,you are the proof that women aren't all based on the material thing.Be blessed for what u've done sis.