Black Poetry : New Year's or Any Time Resolution

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Jan 26, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hereby resolve
    As i rotate and revolve
    To remember every mistake
    i did happen to make
    So that this i can do
    Make mistakes that are new
    Twould be a sin and shame
    If i remade all the same
    i've got to make some new ones
    Get up off my buns
    Get to breaking new ground
    There is so much around
    And it's always error and trial
    And enjoment all the while
    To make mistakes i'm not afraid
    i'll make'em until i'm dead
    But between the mistakes you can guess
    i'm making plenty progress
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow poet of the week
    flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always better to learn from those mistakes first time round, very nice drop, poet of the week.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes !!!!
    flow on sir Poet
    lovin the flowz
     
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    mzblkangel , Thanks for the positive strokes.

    watzinaname, Thanks, yeah, our mistakes should teach us how to go on stronger than before; if not then we're just floundering.

    RICH, Thanks for your positivity and encouragement.

    Miss Takes should help us to get the right Takes without missing.
    Peace and Blessings All Yawl.
     
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