Black Poetry : NEW YEARS KISS!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As she gazed in the mirror at her crimson lips.
    She knew her man wouldn't be able to resist.
    Her perfume she placed strategically.
    Behind her ear , her thighs and behind her knees.
    She placed her diamonds in her ears.
    And reflected on the passing years.
    The misletoe was fine for Christmas, but tonight
    when the clock struck Twelve would be momentus.

    She draped her neck with her diamond necklace.
    And one last time she powdered her lovely face.
    Her hair piled high with curls escaping.
    And now her slinky dress she was draping.
    Garter belt compliments of Victoria's secrets.
    Silk stocking covering her generous thighs...
    a twinkle in her big brown eyes.
    Yes tonight would be something special.
    The misletoe was fine for Christmas, but tonight
    she was sure he wouldn't forget this.

    She lotioned her hands as she had her legs and feet.
    Slipped into her Prada's that fit her so neat.
    A sip of Bubbly before she departed.
    For this brown vixen the party had already started.
    She puffed her spliff one last time.
    And finished her bubbly just in time.
    The doorbell rang in perfect melody.
    The twinkle in her eye saying someones
    here for me.
    One last primp before she made her grand entrance.
    The misletoe was fine for Christmas, but tonight was
    alive with the thought of that perfect "KISS".

    He looked divine in his Tuxedo, a rose in his hand
    and a smile on his face.
    Everything proper and everything in place.
    He started to smile as she floated down the staircase.
    The smile now seemed to cover his whole face.
    A limo tonight as they planned to come home safely.
    Nothing to good for my baby and me!
    The ride to the Party was cozy and quiet.
    As she nibbled on canapes and forgot about a diet.
    The Ballroom was crowded but elegant.
    He ushered her gallantly to a table in front.
    The misletoe was fine for a Christmas kiss,
    but nothing would replace the memory of this.

    Dinner, entertainment and dancing and laughter.
    But, the real party she knew would start after.
    Five minutes and counting the crowd seemed to
    sizzle as bottles of champagne popped , poured
    and fizzled.
    They always tickled her nose as the pungent but
    sweet taste of the Cristal arose.
    His arm around her as he nuzzled her neck.
    She felt her self tingle she didn't know what to expect.
    The count down began as they sang "AULD ANGE SYNE"
    an old German melody from someplace in time.
    He lifted her chin, she licked her lips, she smelled his
    cologne as he leaned into the kiss.
    All the while the crowd was cheering, the new year now
    here and the kisses were searing.
    Soft and then deeper their tongues danced like a waltz.
    The misletoe was fine for their first Christmas kiss...
    but nothing on earth would ever compare to the
    NEW YEARS KISS!!!!!!!!!!!
    :kiss:
    BJS(C)2003
    HAPPY NEW YEAR!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa!
    hot lips
    HAPPY NEW YEAR 2 U sistah
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy New Years big sis....
    love this flow.....
    nice drop
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading and responding!

    Yes indeed, the muse is sitting on my shoulder filling me with
    creative manna from heaven...It's a delight to know you enjoy
    reading me as I enjoy reading you.
    Angel-You know you my baby girl! God Bless you with Peace
    and Prosperity as you enter the New Year.
    Rich-May your New year be filled with sucess to make you proud,
    Trials to keep you strong,Luck to make you smile at life and enough
    of all lifes treasures to keep you truly happy...YOU DESERVE IT!
    HAPPY NEW YEARS AND AS USUSAL...
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! :spinn:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed sistah Queen cheers as it ring in
     
  6. LeRoy

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    Wow, that was a nice piece
    Ive got much love for this one
    thats some real talk
    KEEP WRITING AND I'LL KEEP READING
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Leroy!

    I do what I can...LOL! I really appreciate your comments.
    They are so inspiring to me. Thanks for reading and responding.
    I look forward to doing the same.

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Very nice....very nice.

    ...in more ways than one. Lead Black woman....lead. :bowdown:

    :toast:
     
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    Like those images of a New Years Eve kiss...Happy New Year!!
     
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    Totally lovin this lil story here.......my interest copied the lines as they grew..oh yea and Happy New Year to ya too :spin: :x:
     
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