Black Poetry : ...New Year, New Tear...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Jan 9, 2006.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..a New Year ,New tear she cried today...
    helpless muneca,heart torn ,her soul died today..
    i hurt her,left her hopeless in misery..
    im a greedy sonava shhhhh,whats gotten into me..?
    L's got alot on his plate,and she kept the food coming..
    heartwarming dishes to a man who knew love wasnt his true calling...
    cause he was alwayz falling,
    down in ditches....
    alwayz about money,
    and gettin down wit pidgeons....
    had her hooked on his lies when he smiled at misses
    smoke screen cloud his judgement,when she returned with kisses....
    he burned his bridges,turned and witnessed a birth
    a year before he had witness a curse,but his Earth,came first
    with a baby he needed........
    seeded the woman he thought he loved,and in return she seeded
    him with hurt,hes the jerk,for believin'
    he could work this all out even tho both were cheatin'...
    fast forward,that was the past ,this is the present...
    he lost the baby,then lost his mind,and his new girl was pregnant...
    but she aborted,lost the child,for independence....
    hes just lost now,livin a life of repentance....
    and this sentence,ends with a 'sentence' he seeks
    messed up thing,L got court next week.............................
     
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    I got your back dont trip
    I still cant believe this shhhh
    My mind like what the hell is L going through
    What my man gone do
    Court cases like its the thing to do
    I pour a little liquor after reading this too
    Its deeper than six feet
    When caskets come down
    Tears drop my lids
    As frowns drown outside sounds
    Misery of a lost child
    I have been there before
    Abortion killed my child
    Showed me misery within
    Didnt make me love
    Brought me hate within
    So my Soul goes out to my Brother
    We locked and I hope you see
    We have to be down for each other
    Cause some sisters out here killing thee....
    Soul Of A Man
     
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    felt the emotions in your words flow on poet.:love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling the deepness and the depth of this joint
    this was heavy...............................wow.
     
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    ah man this was poignant...

    very nicely done...
     
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    As the world turns, know that actions can stop the cycle of pain by not feeding it

    YOU can do it

    and it aint all NIKE

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    thank you al for ur feedback,im glad you like it,and im glad yall read it

    peace
     
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    Life can take us deep up in it, like we don't know if we're coming or going. I feel ya.
     
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    word...this flow rolled off my mind...
    100% dope...

    one love
    khasm
     
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