Khasm13 : new world....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    a smattering of cattle rings moving past the pulsing pond
    next to the forest gathering nature forms a closer bond
    violet views of dusk pungent pheromones musk
    move within the gentle elemental breeze
    towering trees sway in the day and may let u lay
    or maybe try getting a fitting sitting on the dock of the bay
    whispers are never muffled no matter what you say
    intentions are pure pictures painted freely without pay
    forever soaks seconds into years
    tears are never near
    but never to far
    the moon takes delight in outshining the stars
    the mind replaces cars and planes
    starships are not needed unlike the rain
    the crippled no longer require the use of canes
    only proper maintenance of their brain
    peak perfection physical unique unearthly selection
    oh yeah what was the question?
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    the question was

    new world

    feeling dat der
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    say what !!! oh yeah da question indeed was New world
    is it in order .....This was mad phat bruh ! u keep spitting truth on us Khasm
     
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    I love the way your mnd works. this was strait truth righ here. This was an excellent scribe my brother.
     
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    Bro Khasm
    Keep Flowing!
     
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    The images that these lines made my mind conjure up, were so peaceful. Glad you're filling our space with your words again.
     
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    You said a mouthful

    Khasm, no matter what you say, I dig it.

    Flow On... like the Euphrates :slobber:
     
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    such a quirky minded cat you are :read:

    my fav line
    i do concur... good stuff :read:

    carry on don quixote :read: :D
     
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    so so dope Brother Khasm!
     
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    For me, you have such an existential, stream-of-consciousness type of vibe to your writings.

    Loved that part, especially!
     
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