Black Poetry : New World Order

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "And so it is written, so it shall be done......"


    As the moon passes
    between the earth
    and the sun

    V I S I B L E

    only as a narrow
    crescent at sunset

    My nib erect postures
    as a sharpened
    point ready
    to spew
    passages
    that reject

    SocialUnethicalLovelessControversialConflictMoralAbandonment

    I'll bring forth a post modern lyrical movement
    that creates empowerment
    ........Power
    ...........Of
    ..............Positive
    .................Thought

    Food for daily publication
    With some it may be 'notable'
    whereas for others it may be 'unusual'

    Pay closer attention to the details
    Language StRuCtUrE thematic tensions
    of the text

    The pieces of my life are irrelavant
    RAISING your consciousness is superlative
    to the extreme

    N
    E
    X
    US

    ...functioning perfectly since I have discovered
    my poetical niche
    promising not to nickel and dime you to death
    with too many songs of

    "that's the way love goes" or
    "you really got a hold on me"
    too much - much too
    same ol' same

    That's tense ~ past ... tension released
    future holds N2 to Nvy

    Nocturnal nightingale shrills seeking thrills
    airglowing in-genius discernably regular
    looking for descriptive definitions of "N2"
    on her own page in WEBSTER'S III

    And in the New World Order
    I'll send poetrygrams at reduced rate
    delievered to readers
    by the next day
    GUARANTEED


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IN A STATE OF ......SPEECH....LESS...NESS

    N2.......SHHHH***********ZZZZZZZZZIIIITTTTT

    THERE R SEVERAL PASSAGES HERE.....**** !!!!
    NO WORDS....NO WORDS....


    On A Continuous Journey...But temporarily standing still :cool:
    GYPSYMAN
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayuuuum N2

    Sistah you's reaching and touching peeps on a whole nutha level!

    shakin mah head in awe of your

    Extraordinary talent!



    Royally Supreme...expectin nuthin less from N2 the Queen!
     
  4. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stuck!!!!

    In amazement at the way this was put down... cause gurl...you definitely put it down. And true to the words that were placed on the paper... I'm diggin this scribe for sho....
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GYPSY

    RLMAO :D

    Thank you brotha for the reply!

    1 :heart:
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sis' Afri~

    Why thank you sista gurl!

    1.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Neak Neak~

    Glad ya' liked the feel of this flow sistah~
    Thank you for reading ME.
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    T.T...T...T...T...T...T...T...T.............................T...T...tight! this piece is so tight it has me stuttering.

    one love,blak
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    Nah...but with you readin' ME, I become Wide Open, Wide LOOSE~


    One :heart: baby!!
     
  10. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no
    words
    to discribe
    my sheer
    and
    utter
    speachlessness
    I have been left with nothing to say but
    wow!:eek:
     
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