Black Poetry : New Title!!!:"Misrepresentation... Lack of Communication"

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Could this be...
    Misery..
    Desire of fantasy...
    Never known to thee...
    Only to believe...
    Another Bad Dream...

    Crusifiction..
    Resurection...
    Infection...
    Protection...
    Pruned into Fatuation...
    The Sanitation... of deadly emotions...

    Cried...
    the nine lives...
    i got 1 one..
    my life is done..
    one life..
    one mind...
    one brain...
    but several tries...
    at lies...
    deceit
    defeat...
    and the depletion...
    of communication...
    between the sexes...
    Complex situations...
    Obligations..
    And easy Going Penatration....
    Find the diamond..
    Bust the Cherry...
    ***** the chic....
    We in a hurry...
    Bury the hatchet...
    And let the **** ride...
    Another brother man done taken a slide
    Step aside.....
    And protect yo self!!!
    Don't let them disrespect yo stuff!!!
    Check yo self!!!
    Check that brother!!!
    Just another case...
    we face...
    walking the streets of this world...
    man... child... woman... and poor girl...
    Lost with it out a clue...
    Following their disciples as we sit back and ridicule...
    Yet never step up to help them through...
    Tides of waves...
    and sand graves...
    bending backs...
    and modern slaves...
    the protection...
    now neglection of our ourselves...
    Sweet peace...
    reach thee....
    follow a sand of amazing days of lives raised in pastures... lost to a native.. that was found in a river of whales... and she sleeps on their tales...
    ride the sea.. of dreams...
    crack pheen and queens of teams..
    of ******* and hoes...
    we dialect...
    simply to protect...
    ourselves.. from pain inflicted...
    STICKS AND STONE MAY BREAK MY BONES!!!
    BUT WORDS WILL NEVER HURT ME!!!!

    LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA

    i CAN'T FIND A REASON
    A season...
    to free my destiny..
    to confess to thee...
    all my in inner dreams...
    wants and fantasy...
    aww...
    sweet ecastacy.....
    Peace....
     
  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I found a Title!!! "Misrepresentation... Lack of Communication" :D
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shaneak.


    thank you for showin' yo flow... my sister!!

    "misrepresentation... lack of communication"
    fits right nice-ly. i loved the natural rhythym
    of your flow. this piece begs to be read aloud.
    you should read this one for the spoken word
    forum??? huh?? :D

    :heart:
    elayne.
     
  4. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why thank you... cause it was just that.. Natural :D I wasn't even expecting it.. I'm almost scared my writing style has changed... I guess thats that road right now...

    Back to the drawing bored... :x:
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like that
    thank you
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Shaz!!!

    Aye.. I just read it out loud to my boyfriend!!! He said it was Hot!!!:D
     
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    FEELING THIS SHA
    LOVEDIDED YO" FLAVA
    10000000000000000000000000000000% girl
    feeling this all the way SHA
    no doubts
    at all

    dss/NYC
     
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