Black Poetry : new piece~no title

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You tell me the lovin is
    s w e e t


    in the midst of heat you...
    cum quick

    you ain't slick but a
    sly son of a--

    didn't take into consideration
    my need for sexual gratification

    wantin to make up you begin to
    suck up--

    sucking up all of me

    five......

    ..........ten...........


    thirty......................
    ...............................sixty
    minutes and still

    my...clyt-or-I won't

    R
    A
    I
    N

    the strain I...
    can't contain but

    in ALL of my
    woman-ness I
    close my eyes and
    maintain

    you lickin like a
    kitten

    l a p p i n g

    his last
    bowl of milk

    tongue tied and tired w/
    lock jaw
    attempting to handle all of
    this woman

    apologizing and claiming this isn't
    n o r m a l behavior

    crying that my "stuff" is just
    soooooooooo s w e e t...

    Heavenly like Jesus Christ
    our Lord and Savior

    you scream

    " Ohhh GOD"

    and me...

    I just sit in silent disgust

    wishin

    I

    could

    say

    the

    same

    about


    YOU
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I shall say is...

    WHOA!!!!!

    :love:
    GQ
     
  3. M. O. A. B.

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    UPON FURTHER REVIEW......

    IT'S FUNNY THE THINGZ
    THAT ARE MISSED
    ONCE THE OPPORTUNITY
    TO RECEIVE THEM PASSES BY!

    SATISFACTION IS NO EXCEPTION..
    AND RECIDIVISM CAN BE LIKE A COLLAR
    TOO TIGHT AROUND ONE'S OWN NECK!
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    AFRI

    you my girl now
    i know you not out there
    selling yourself short
    by wasting time with some
    dumbass

    feeling this piece


    1

    dssNY
     
  5. Giovanni

    Giovanni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this poem

    was sexy, funky, funny, and real.. I'm a guy (don't think women are the only ones who suffer with dissapointment) and I can relate to this.. even though I had 2 sistas' claimin' my lovin' was s w e e t and I was the one sit(ting) in silent disgust.. definately lovin' this and won't be the last time I check you.. thanks again for the read..
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!!!

    i have no wordz but i feel ya emotional pain
    of lack bliss.........u bang dem keyz as will..:eek:
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    afri

    Sistah....... I'm lovin' this phrase.... "my ****or-I won't rain"....:lol:


    Definitely a creative piece my sistah!!

    Always :heart:

    N2
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DiZZ!!!!

    Ammmm!!!

    And I can't say no more!!!
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    afri....

    i gotta whole new respeck'd
    for u now.

    very talented!

    hw
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    afri, gurl...you brought this one through, fo showl. i really like it, because it's tha truth, it's like that sometymes. keep on scribin', i'm always lovin' yo scribes, dear poetess.
     
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