Black Poetry : new morning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by midnightsson, Nov 3, 2002.

  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I woke up today with a fresh, clear mind
    my body and soul felt in tune with the world
    I know this feeling won’t last, so I decided to cement these thoughts
    on paper, before they vanished to vapor.
    The air was crisp and cool, the sun flirting with the horizon
    my eyes took in everything, the birds flying around busy
    the slight dew sprinkled lightly over the grass
    the clouds not yet connected, the streets not full of cars
    the last trace of the moon slowly succumbing to the new morning
    The faint sounds of the night fade out and the sound of the birds...
    start the new days symphony...directed by the greatest composer eternally
    I could smell the frost in the air, and taste the freshness of the new day
    my heart absorbed these things this new morning and swelled with gladness
    how many mornings do we get to appreciate...not enough for sure!
    I thank God for this opportunity to gaze upon HIS greatness
    my life is still not right, but at least I feel I can survive this cold world
    I wish I could give these feelings to myself, but I can’t
    I have to depend on happiness of others, and a little love in my life...

    Derrick H.
     
  2. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice images
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir indeed and when one's
    smile upon the joy of life
    which forth GOD given
    surely within self is a new morning....Thanks 4 dis here
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the imagery and spirituality in the piece was very heartfelt. thanks for this midnightsson.

    thepoetsean
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey midnight

    cool and crisp. I like the way you flowed night into day.





    One
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    aww this was beautiful

    keep writing

    pd

    :)
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tru Dat

    Excellently scribed!

    Reas
     
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