Black Poetry : New Luv

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Style of the new moon
    stirring of de new luv
    scratches of nails
    scarring her firm breasts
    at tyme she eyez them
    at tyme she shields

    a poor hand cover da treasure
    like da dearest of life
    for da first tyme
    she knew de act of luv
    as the joy of dalliance fill her thoughts
    she then felt da motion of luv

    dis new love set a boiling point
    as her heart pump faster
    a flash of steam kick in
    as da desires lites a fire
    of great rare romance

    she soon wrap her self round
    wit shuddering of delightful joy
    in dis bliss of new luv

    so she continue her erotic touch

    safely from the eyez of vicious friendz
    she holds the gems mirrored in her face
    she trace slowly in a circle motion
    she layed her head back in a low moan
    she truely felt fate of a new luv
    placing her at peace
    lowers her brow
    that none can see and then with tender care
    she studies da luv bites of her lower lip
    in da heat of night her desires 4 passion
    left her mind not to wonder
    but relax in da bliss of a new luv:heart: :love: :heart: :kiss:
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, u got a sista heated up in dis piece. I sho luv da way u flow in dis poem. Keep up da good work richness:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    Thanks just leting my pen roam da canvas today
     
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    see a new luv was found in her weakest lust for passion
    so she took control and found a new luv
    her hands was all she needed.....................
     
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    I FEEL A LOVE A NEW
    HOT AND BOILING TO A BREW
    SULTRY AND SAVORY THE AROMA, FALLS FRESH AS IF MORNING DEW.....
    THESE MOMENTS ARE FAR AND FEW
    AS I EMBRACE LOVE A NEW
    CAUGHT IN THE ABISS A LOVE FOR TWO
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich

    Stop gettin all the sistas worked up dog!!! lol

    Reas
     
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    Herlove is by far a new
    slowly caressing da bite
    of what she knew
    handz down movin round
    mind wimp in da faze
    her body crave a sexual mass
    and so hot on da spot
    a new love was found
    her moans of whispers
    was all she knew
    as she embraced her only touch.

    see herlove dis was da aroma of bliss
    and soundly she passed it on.
     
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    hey Reas......man i gotta lay out da perfection of her new love
    u know me ......lol
     
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    IT FEELS / SMELLS LIKE SOMETHING GOOD IS COOKING IN THE OVEN.... DIS HERE SET IT HOT !!!!!! JUST SERVE WHAT U GOT ......
    WITHOUT HESITATION, RESERVATIONS, OR DRAWING OUT A PLOT
    JUST GIVE WHAT U GOT ........
     
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    good stuff rich