Black Poetry : New Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Jan 12, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I found new love
    The strangest of places
    This like true love
    I cant explain it
    Barely Phantom the thought
    Barely find the expressions
    Expression to show how I feel
    Its Lovely that I know
    I have one that cares
    Its Lovely that I
    Know she will be there
    She makes my
    Voice drop a tone
    Pics make me yurn
    Body ache and turn
    Have you felt this before???
    I havent felt this before
    I havent had a resaon
    Now I feel this for sure
    I said to myself
    I would never fall again
    WTF am I thinking
    She already got a man
    But I hold my head high
    I have fallen for you
    Words I know are speaking
    Speaking so many truths
    I know of the right
    And the wrong thing to do
    I know the words
    Words are overdue
    This the only way I knew
    I could really reach out and touch you
    You the One
    So what is my perception
    Kind of cluttered to be honest
    Cause I have lost all understanding
    I have broken my own rules
    Does that make me the fool
    Or just another Brother
    That has fallen for U???

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kewl
    another saturday night

    great write

    u keep growing

    Peace

    Patrice
     
  3. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tant, you got mad skills we need to hook up and do a calb one day.
     
  4. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man that was nice!
    I sure wish someone would say that to me and actually mean it!:bingo:
     
  5. spicybrown

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    Tantrum.....

    It's good to see the more 'sensual' side of the Tantrum:spinstar: . Beautiful scribe
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was a wonderful pledge of love, I did enjoy reading it, thanks for sharing
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what the kid is a lover who knew!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :):):):)...beautiful...
     
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    Nice .
     
  10. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THank You Sister PCQ
    Cursed Heart & Spicy Brown
    Queentswana & Nevar & Lovelygoldenone

    THank You Brother Defiantson & Ibrahim

    Much Love & Respect Poets
     
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