Black Poetry : New Life

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by eternal, Jan 9, 2002.

  1. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i
    have never been so in love
    no
    not like this.
    i
    think that Your existence has
    completed my being.
    i
    never knew what true love felt like
    until You entered my womb
    and i felt You
    moving inside of me.
    how could this be
    that i have felt
    in love
    infatuated
    intrigued
    and in desperation
    but never have i been hit with
    this before
    i can't wait to meet You
    to bring You home
    to introduce You to the world
    to show You that
    my existence is no longer
    the most important thing in the word...
    next to God, there is You.
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep e!!! sounds like a virgin voyage, a first love, a hymen happenstance that took you over the cliff - that cliff of loosing self to him in wonderous love thang!!!! sweet my sista' sweet.
     
  3. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really??!!

    This is how I feel right now, but it isn't about a person I have me formally yet...it is the feeling I feel for my unborn, but I can see where you get the insight from. Thank you for the compliment to my work.
    Humbled and honored
    E:heart:
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    e- missed the mark!!!! i can see you angle! maybe i'm to deep in this relationship thang right now!!

    i guess or rather know - this supports a theory of mine. just mine not the gospel!! but i think a woman can love more deeply because of her ability to carry and birth another of God's creations! sounds crazy but as you said - next to God your child is the most important thing! that extra-man/*****/husband/lover/friend whatever!! God then Baby! Men can walk away so easily - but a momma - that's another story! I pray you are blessed with your desire!!! keep the flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now

    sho ya love coz it's deeper then one know !!:) :kiss:
     
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    Yes!

    Thanks e, this really hit home!:toast:
     
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    THIS IS GOOD

    I APPRECIATE THE WOMAN FOR THE SIMPLE FACT THAT SHE CAN GIVE LIFE. THAT IS LOVE ALL BY ITSELF.
    THANKS FOR THE READ POET.:)
     
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    Still...

    Amazed at what you do with wordz! Congrats baby gurl!

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
  9. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you!!!

    Danilyn, so glad to have someone share the feeling!! {hug}

    Reason, thank you!! That means alot!!

    Rashad and Rich, you too will experience this love, and probably on the same level. It is not reserved for just us women!!:kiss:
     
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    SPREAD THIS ONE TO ....

    THE IGNORANT, LAZY AND STUPID WOMEN WHO TAKE LIFE FOR GRANTED.

    JUST TO CARRY ANOTHER LIFE IS A MIRACLE AND A GIFT!

    WHEN PEOPLE TREAT LIFE, THIS GIFT, AS NOTHING AND EASY TO GET RID OF LIFE, THEN THERE IS NO HAPPINESS THAT WILL BE AFFORDED TO THE CONTINUATION OF THAT HATEFUL PERSONS LIFE.

    THANK YOU FOR REMINDING US ALL WHERE THIS GIFT COMES FROM!!!

    :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
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