Black Poetry : New Direction.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Oct 30, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My direction
    Was lost..
    I was always wishing and searching
    For that one dream of a prefect love
    That came from within…As I gave….
    But not received
    In a hush I would cry
    As the dark covered me
    And then……
    You wiped my tears away
    With your warmth
    And hold my fears and protect me….
    Holding my hand
    The storm is over
    My past is my past
    Looking up….
    Holding on
    I was lost off track
    Couldn’t find my way
    As the direction got dimmer
    Reaching for love that was not there
    But you walked in my life
    And shown me true love is alive
    Sky seems to be brighter
    Chasing the blues away
    Clearing my pain so I can
    Begin to see once more
    You’re my inspiration guiding me
    With your wisdom
    Loving me in full circle
    I hold the key to my dreams
    As you hold the key….
    To my heart
    And I know
    You’re my shoulder…
    When I cry
    When I am sad
    When I am happy
    Just because...
    And now the starz dance
    As you walked in and took my hand
    And I see my direction
    Much clearer now…
    No more wishing
    And yearning…
    Pain of yesterday memories
    Is gone….
    My direction
    Was lost…..couldn’t find my way
    But you took my hand….
    No more wishing and searching
    For love found me
    This time

    (C) 2004
    Poetry by an Angel​
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dig your new attitude!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow and the way it will be ya new direction
    will carry u a long way !
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for the love and support...
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    likewise sista Queen
     
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    that wat seems an enternal wait 4 love.... I pray ur wait was not in vain, and I'd hope u'd pray for when my love comes... cuz lord kno I need that support in my lyfe, mad prop for this drop.
    Hisili - AKA K1K1 AKA CT
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent piece,
    Good things come to those who wait, and it seems like in this case... the "wait" was not in vain. outstandingly written.
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done, well done I give you much respect for sharing such a personal matter. I feel you so much on this one, I use to go after what I wanted and for the most time got it or him, I should say and then when "I" got him he was all wrong and I was too. Then I had to pray and ask God who he wanted for me and a year later he answered that prayer. I have now been married six years and counting. It was a new direction for me just to talk to God.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes it do and i strongly believe it to...thank you for the love and support
    means alot coming from my big sis!!!!!love ya

    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not so much as a personal matter...I believe a writer should be able to write

    any emotion on anything...and i love to write...but i feel every word you say

    and indeed in time it shall come and its a wonderful thing.....thank you for

    sharing a part of you and letting me know you can relate to this flow.....

    happy you enjoy as you did

    Peace
    Angel
     
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