Black Poetry : New Chapter another page 07

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know not beloved

    yet your love calling me
    understanding your stray
    u compromise me
    long term like a summer song
    yet the fading rose abid us
    my heart crimps in loom
    knowing i'm so worthy of thee
    my soul goes beyond reasons
    as i stand aloof on the bankz
    ask me no more but feel me
    whither doth stray pass
    da golden nightingale in his arms
    he can never be me !
    forth thy loveth runneth ova
    to enrich thy body
    I shall not fade in the westy
    nor will i limp in da cold north
    i'm east bound upon ya love
    as i land southly at your feet
    our purest of wholesome blooms
    as we journey deeper
    my love is a ravishing connection
    your beauty is my soulace
    ask me not but feel me
    and know that i am
    whom so loveth thee unconditional
    ur my starz in da night :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
    my sun upon day light :huh:
    and my moons of morrow.

    :ilu:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, this was touching beyond belief, like a modern day Shakespeare reading an ode to his love...whew...
     
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    wow i love this piece rich. Loved it so much that i read this piece twice. i felt the emotion and the warmth in this! new chapter is for new beginnings!
     
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    I like the way you laid this piece to canvas. Excellent flow poet.
     
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    Thankz watz...it was an message to a new start as i sum it up to
    da Black Romeo call Romello da second coming of shakespeare.


    Thank u Nevar it surely is one of my deepest sending notes from da
    acts of Romello

    AHMOSE Thank u for the warmth and read surely i am pleased u like
    and understood the stroll.
     
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    For every page is a story untold as pen clash to upend it's tale
    each chapter mends to da next as life is created to thy beloved
    there is no limit to reach nor an end as the chapters continue .
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    You leave me speechless.

    Much Luv
     
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    u alwayz have me speechless ....thank u 4EVERLUV
     
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