Black Poetry : New Birth (In Honor of Poetry Month)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 3, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um.... I have to give props to Hunter, who reminded me that April is Poetry Month, and a line I borrowed from sista Sherykah...(although she might not remember) :D If it comes off a bit disjointed, just count it to a sista's frame of mind in the night season :wink:



    I thought with my heart
    my mind followed suit
    then I fell, did a swan dive
    puddy ~ first
    into your ocean
    of persons/places/things

    it was love at first
    write...

    your sweet loving
    that conjugates my
    verbs....that
    un-dangles my participles

    your beautiful body
    of warm verbiage
    and joy
    complete with
    perfect prepositional
    phrases

    I shudder
    when we touch lips to tips
    when we join
    our literary hips

    and I lose
    myself inside us
    as you enter me
    and slip, slide/glide our pronouns
    to that place

    double spaced....

    I can't tell you
    how it feels
    to be spider/locked in love
    loins and limbs
    massaging my
    pentamet"her" inside, with your
    rhyth "him"

    I love you
    want to cum
    first person singular
    with you

    baby

    you make me
    that four letter word
    that rhymes with
    "know it"

    you give me that
    urge to go way past
    "tell"
    and
    "show it"


    I thought with my heart
    and our minds birthed
    this rigtheous
    body of
    orgasmic work...

    let's flow it

    Alyce (c) 2002
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetry month celebration set off :toast:
    thanx for the knowledge.

    you are mindblowin with the pen..

    nfinite
    jh
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All right then Sista!!

    Whew !! U did your thang on this here!!
    Get yo flow On!!
    I can dig it!!
    :toast:
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Alyce.


    you my dear... personi-fy that 4 ltr word
    that rhymes wit "know it" ... & you betta
    know it!! :D i love-did this a VERY lot!!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok, all I can say is that this one (and the latter) deserves a standing ovation for purest representation of that four letter word that is suffixed with "tress". Just when I think that I have experienced, seen, and heard it all... you drop this. Dope, no doubt.
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all...

    Sista Sherykah, your flo-etic response hit all cylinders... letting me know your soul ain't forgot... :heart:

    much love and thanks, again

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!! Alyce ya open da doors up to dis highly pose month!
    POETRY CLASH.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    alyce

    this is one beautiful piece of art work here poet
    and i

    lovedided it

    dssNY
     
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