Black Poetry : NEVERENDING...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lpoet, Mar 11, 2004.

  1. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    havnent posted in here in long time...hope u enjoy

    Who was i to critizie the path outlined
    by the icy tears i cried for
    in my heart
    jesus died
    rosary beads and
    holy water baptized
    the soul of a lamb and
    body of a lion
    see i was not who they saw for
    skin so often covered
    my flaws
    beseached these blessings
    amongst a storm of sin
    eyelids hang low
    keeping emotion in
    this was my sanctuary
    and i prayed to the alter of
    forgivness knowing i would do it again
    old fears fade away quickly as i
    wondered down the isles of remenisence
    cluttering page after page with my pen
    eventually the memmories sank in and
    i was forced to spit each vowel out the
    corners of my mouth
    and when the after taste ran thin I again
    drank from the cup of filth lust and
    beautiful sin....
    i just cant stop b/c
    it feels so good giving in
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was vert tyte and divine
     
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    welcome back home :grouphug:
    divinely blessed scribe :)
     
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    lovely flow
    glad ya back
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many things can lead to temptation, thank goodness for those things that are a blessing. Nice flow.
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    sounds like you want to sing that song:
    "just ask me I've been there..i've seen angels and sin there
    i knocked and they let me in......."

    Okay...as long as you keep sharing your creative juices with us
    knock....and keep flowing..
    but be a little careful (smile)
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    You sure did a good job breaking down TEMPTATION!


    And......HAPPY BIRTHDAY!