Black Poetry : never

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Mar 22, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Never

    Never, never thought
    I’d be here today
    To sit here and look at this day
    Not knowing
    The words
    That graze the page
    Oh, what a song we made
    Just to think about
    The fights we had
    An how u wished ur mama had a dad
    And it’s funny how time
    Time went by
    Slipped away with
    A cry

    Ohhh.
    Somebody tell me
    How I lost
    This one
    An how I thought we had rhythm
    Something to smile
    At
    Laugh and cry
    If I could go back in time
    I’d take back those words and treat like the queen
    U were meant to be

    Baby, if I could go back to the times
    When we laughed
    And said we be together forever
    Looking for places to stay
    Planning things
    I was just on my way
    To purchase a wedding wing

    I feel there will never be one like u
    I’ll never look at women the same
    On my bended knee
    Saying come back to me
    How much I loved u
    And didn’t see it
    I wish upon a star
    U would come back to me

    When the sun goes down and
    The night subsides
    Something in me died
    When I let u
    Fall before me
    Oh how you used to adore me
    Please
    Don’t ignore me
    Pick up
    Pick up the phone
    And talk to me
    Tell me u love me
    Maybe we can be friends
    And if there is something
    Left for me
    I’ll give u my last wish
    The best of me

    If I
    Could reach out the page and just talk to you
    Talk to you
    Talk to you
    I’mm missing u
    Like the son misses his father
    How u passed away
    But now
    I gotta live with the pain…
    If I made the right turn
    The right way
    Just toward a day
    When I shouldn’t say

    "RoomTime vol. 1"
    copyright daniel Davis
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight
    i enjoyed this scribe....
    flow on...
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The places we end up in which we never thought we'd be...wow. Causes me to think, and shake my head. This was heartfelt, flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this open my mental up very nicely done indeed
     
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