Black Poetry : Never Told Me

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No One ever told me
    Life could get rough
    No one ever told me
    Some will leave you

    Some will strand you
    No one told me
    Beware of the touch
    No one told me

    No one told me
    I would lose my life so early
    No one told me
    it was hard getting it back

    Watch ya Back
    No One told me
    Keep your self on track
    No one told me

    No one told me
    I could be a Doctor
    No one told me
    I could Live My dreams

    It's okay to dream
    No one told me
    Everything is not what it seems
    No one told me.......

    No one told me
    Girl you better watch out for that
    No one said
    You are more special than that

    You deserve the best
    No one ever told me
    You have a better head
    No One said

    No one wondered
    Dang that girl done change
    No One Advised me
    Guys weren't Everything

    When I spoke
    No one hinted I was Just a Little too grown
    Or they did
    But not when I see you looking Stupid

    Did I learn from the Best
    Or was I Just No One's Interest?
    Was it help from you... Now that you can put me out there
    Or was I just No One to brother not cursing in front of?

    No one ever told me
    I would turn out this way
    No one ever Told me
    I could be great

    One even called me Holier than Thou(What the!!!)
    But never once told me
    Thou was Holy at all
    So now This One takes the fall?

    No Ones ever Going to Tell me
    They are Proud of What Ive Done
    No One Here will tell me that
    But I do Know Some One

    See this Lil Sistah Here
    Can Recognize Some From None
    I Can Now See That I was and even More Now am More than Some
    Now I gain Instead of subtract....I know Nothing Equals No one

    I found that I am Unique
    Yes I calculated on My own, me x's 3
    Now I can feel good for my self....I have no Deceit
    Because No One Ever told me


    :swim: :climb:
    (Both These Things I Love So Much!)
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi PLATINUMILLITY1
    Wow!
    I honestly can relate to each one of your stanza
    Sigh!
    Yes indeed. No one ever told you
    Yet you learned. What I feel from your poem
    Is that you have become your own best friend
    Wonderful sister1 I could feel how painful this was
    to scribe, and I Thank you so much for sharing
    this flow with US all. You are special and yes Unique



    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I feel every lick u speak
    no one every told none of us the road wouldn't be easy
     
  4. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Blue Water.....
    I took me time...But I was determined LOL
    I need it as well
    just as the Love you and $$RICH$$ are giving me....
    Thank you $$RICH$$
    ~PeaceandLove~ Fam
    ~Blessings~
     
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    ITS SO AMAZING THE REALIZATIONS YOU MAKE WITH OUT ANY FOREKNOWLEDGE.
    YOU ARE AWESOME. SO REMEBER THAT NO MATTER WHAT NOONE EVER TOLD YOU.
    FLOW ON POET.
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blessings...
    I appreciate your AWESOME words Sis.
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    No one ever told you, so you yearned and learned so you can say, that you are a precious jewel whose luster no one can steal away. Just do you, sis.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D Thank You so Much Watzinaname :D
    That Is so On!!!!!!!
    ~Blessings~
     
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