Quiet Poetry Lounge : Never Thought

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Never thought you be the one
    To make me cry all night
    Never thought you be the one
    To do the impossible to me
    Never thought
    Just never thought
    The dreams the wishes
    The love..
    All was wrong
    Lead me to believe that love was meant
    And the whole time
    It was impossible
    My being just was not enough
    Run around lies
    See it don’t matter what you did for me
    Because you lied for my love
    One woman’s dream
    Another’s evil
    Like a bad night mare
    And heaven cant delivery me
    For I played the fool
    Never thought you be the one
    That makes me cry
    Wishing I was not breathing
    Never thought….
    It would be you

    (c) 2005
    untitled life
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we never know where one may take us but we do know how
    to see it and tag it and heal from it ur a strong Black woman
    flow on i feel these emotional pains inside sis.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As we all have our moments, but even moments pass. Hang in there, and momentarily ...it will pass.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich for your kind words

    QT we all have them so so moments they do pass and the bond do grows indeed

    thank you both for the loving support of this scribe...Angel
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i see this was the entrance to the healing process. I know mzblack ain't letting nothing hold her down. Keep positive, the rain can't last forever.

    peace out, and great poem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tru dat Angel but know we always fine the answer through it all
     
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    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate..Its really good...you should read my poem manipulator...Its very simpliar to yours
     
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