Black Poetry : Never Thought.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never thought
    I would be writing about you
    But here I am lost and confused
    Wishing you were here…
    But another night
    ………and no you
    So how is a girl to feel?
    When you brought out the woman in
    ………..her (me)

    You speak of me being that woman
    By the time I am 40-ish
    Mind set and strong….
    Won’t know one be able to control
    That I stand my ground
    Got a good head on my shoulders
    No one will be able to run over me
    Is it because your doing it….now?
    Feeding me bad dreams
    Telling me I am part of your wishes
    Taking me in your world
    ……….and just leave
    You say you yearn
    And I bring you alive…..

    Well…….
    As my soul pours my heart hurts
    The darkness is taken hold
    For my joy is no longer
    I never thought
    You would get a letter like this…
    Maybe a love sonnet or just some
    Words to let you know I care
    But I never thought

    See you got my emotions in a swirl
    Can’t seem to breathe
    ………..just want to hide
    full of shame….
    And my love is fallin apart.
    Maybe I played myself
    Because I believed in you
    And it was all a game
    But my heart wanted you
    And your words felt real
    I guess it was a far reach
    A dream of once in a lifetime
    I just never thought….
    This damage would come
    ………………… from you

    Wish you would just rescue me again
    Be attentive as you were
    Tell me you love me
    Tell me this is no dream
    As my soul screams
    I wish……
    Dayum I wish….










    Just never thought
    ....................I would get this from
    You

    (c) 2004
    DDL unknow files
    (Dayum Dat Love)
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Blk Angel....

    That's deep....

    :thanks: for sharing your pain of someone here today and gone tomorrow.

    :toast:
     
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    Oh yes, missing someone is one of the most painful things. This is beautifully put. Many hugs, my sister.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavy mental emotions here
    whew that DDL can be a u know .......i feel ya sis
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love and support

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Wonderful

    :welldone: Deep and felt through the whole drip drop of this spot angel!
    I see u still bringing the good stuff.... :massage:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da love CP

    peace
    angel
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister, this is (to quote another post) "deep". At this moment this is very relevant to my life.

    keep doing that thang

    blak
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Verb....thank you for the read :hearts2:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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