Black Poetry : Never Make me Cry

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Never make me cry

    You can’t promise me forever
    You can’t promise that when we end my heart won’t be broken
    You can’t offer me the moon and the stars
    But promise me this
    Never make me cry
    Tears will wash the pain through my heart
    Flowing on the emotions of heartache
    Please
    Promise
    To never make me cry
    Shattered dreams of tomorrow will pass
    But the tear stains will never fade
    The streaks of broken promises and empty dreams
    Will not wash out of the hem of my soul
    Promise me on a stack of goodbyes
    That you will never
    Make me cry

    Natasha
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I PROMISE U AS I WEEP
    I PROMISE TOO NEVER
    MAKE U CRY !!
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    natasha, i am lovin' the flo of this piece and the word usage, as well. keep on scribin', gurl.
     
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