Black Poetry : Never knew

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Walkin this shore of life
    Head held down not feeling
    lost and alone dying in pain
    As my soul folds…
    And I can no longer go
    on in the day….
    As my tears flow…….and
    they…..
    began to burn
    as my spirit started to yearn
    I slowly move on
    As I pretend….
    to walk this road
    So strong…holding my pride
    Tryin to be……
    my screams had became more
    as my nightmares chasing me
    in day light..no where to turn
    just……..
    holding on…struggling
    alone and lost in the dark
    trying to find my way out
    but…..
    he took my hand
    wipe my pain
    took my fears
    and love me as me…..
    knowing I am not perfect
    knowing I could love….
    He took
    My
    Hand….

    Out of the blue he came…..

    Just when I thought
    Love was not for me…
    Thinking of a lost dream…
    In which I couldnt collect the pieces….
    But he came and completed me

    Never knew what love was
    Until he walk in my life…..

    A blkangel thang.....
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful drop
    filled with a warmth
    of deepness
    nice indeed sis
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    continue your journey, my sistah

    filled with the knowledge that LOVE IS FOR EVERYONE.

    the river flows
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OUT OF THE BLUE HE CAME...

    WELL THAT'S HOW THEY DO
    JUST WHEN YOU FEELIN LIKE
    FATE FORGOT ABOUT YOU
    NOW THERE'S A ONENESS
    UNDENIABLE AND STRONG
    MAY YOUR UNITY BE BLESSED
    AND ETERNALLY LAST LONG

    2fish
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater..thank you sis
    glad u likes

    baller...indeed thanks for the love n support

    Twofish...thank you
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww, so pretty and touching. Nice work, sis.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis..thank you sis
    your support and love given means alot
    Peace n blessings thank you again
     
  8. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    THAT WAS GREAT LADY,,,COMING FROM THE CORE OF BEING. BUT THEN, I NEVER EXPECT ANYTHING LESS OF YOU...YOU'VE SO MUCH TO GIVE, SO FAR TO GO, AND YOUR PATH IS ONE THAT ONLY FEW CAN WALK AS YOU DO. SHINE ON SISTER!!
     
  9. PositiveMindset

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    Ain't it somethin' that when U look 4 somethin' U can never find it?

    But when U "slow down and look around" :shades: it finds U?

    Nice.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keita....thank you the support and love on this and your wonderful comments

    PositiveMindset...indeed we do...thanks for the love and support

    Peace my brothers
    Angel
     
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