Black Poetry : NEVER FORGET YOU!! (TRUE STORY)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Leaky103, Jan 21, 2004.

  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we first met it was an instant attraction,
    as could be verified through our casual interaction.
    What initially caught my attention was not your physique
    but the spirituality in which you seek.
    I had just removed myself from a relationship
    but you took your time, was very patient.
    We conversed about various things
    from politics, family and NBA rings.
    Oh yeah, I had a jones for you
    and what I felt was long overdue.
    So, one evening I prayed to God
    and asked to stop letting my heart be so hard.
    Within a few days my prayers were answered
    when I knew love had spread thru me as light as a ballet dancer.
    Through the years we would argue and fight
    but nothing could prepare me for that fateful night.
    It was on this date that my true love
    would be summons to the Heavens above.
    For awhile my heart was filled with this heavy void
    because of the lash of my tongue, the unkind words could not avoid.
    But even though our last evening ended on a volatile depart,
    you will forever hold a special place in my heart.
    See you had fulfilled your destiny on Earth
    where in me you assisted in my rebirth.
    A rebirth to love, laugh and cry
    without worrying about the pain inside.
    PLEASE LOVERS DON'T TAKE LOVE FOR GRANTED
    BECAUSE IT CAN EASILY BE TAKEN AWAY AND LEAVE YOU FRANTIC.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is so very true Leaky103
    thank you for sharing
    this very deep flow
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 on the point
    and indeed so true
    tyte reality drop
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    sorry for your pain..
    but i really liked the piece...
    stayed with you all the way...not a moment did i deviate or sway...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We really don't know for sure what the next moment will bring. Sorry for your loss, but glad to hear what the life brought your way. Touching scribe.
     
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    it takes a lot of courage to
    share something so personal
    in order to teach & enlighten
    another...

    Thank you...
     
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