Black Poetry : Never Alone

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  1. BrandNewMe

    BrandNewMe Member MEMBER

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    When I was a child I was lost
    In a hostile land,
    As I grew I moved my feet and I was going
    Down this road,
    Over this bridge,
    In search of the path
    I found direction in the measurement of my steps
    My spirit grew from the sturdiness of my feet
    My soul healed from the determination in my heart
    My courage came from the faith, in knowing
    That each step taken,
    I was never alone.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi BrandNewMe ...
    Welcome!! happy to have you aboard,
    That's correct about not being alone...sometimes lonely, but you're never alone...nice piece poet.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem made me take a cleansing sigh after I read it. We're never alone although we may feel that way sometimes. Very inspirational. Welcome to Destee.
     
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    just beautifully done as it had me reflecting
     
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    growth and the guidance of the spirit

    money can't buy this journey

    soul searching is a beautiful thing poet

    especially when you find it

    feeling your journey poet

    peace and much blessings

    and WE ARE NOT ALONE
     
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    thats true as hell for real welcome to destee I really liked that

    When I was a child I was lost
    In a hostile land,
    As I grew I moved my feet and I was going
    Down this road,
    ^^^^
    preach

    8/10
     
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