Black Poetry : Never again

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  1. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    Now that you're gone
    what am I supposed to do
    stop trusting again
    start hating you?
    I can't believe that I was such a fool
    I opened up my heart and let you in
    Considered you to be more than a friend
    I even did the one thing that I swore I'd never do
    I fell head over heels in love with you
    and you didn't even think enough of me to say bye
    Had a sista sittin up all night wondering why
    I told you I always fall for the wrong ones
    So I guess I should've been able to foresee this outcome
    Now I sittin here drying my eyes
    realizing that love wins again
    but this time it took my bestfriend
    Man I swear I aint going through this sh*t again
    I promise
    I'll NEVER let love win again!
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MATCH POINT

    Dee, I am sorry for the fool that lost your friendship and love-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nicley done !!!!!

    ~Natasha ~
     
  4. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the kind words!:)
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    firstly, welcome to Destees.
    Your poem flows well, and I can feel the hurt and anger.
    Good stuff.
    Keep scibin.

    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel u yes i do
    but love is blind
    sometime
    how do we know
    open heart away we go
    but indeed his lost another gain
    weep not dear one
    u can lean on me a friend
    sorry he did u in
    no goodbye's
    dat's o'kay
    sunshine headed ya way
    i feel u heart weep and ya soul into part
    it will mend wit lovin friendz
    relax and let it all out!
     
  7. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    First @ $$RICH$$ BIG UPS TO THE MIDWEST!:toast:
    Secondly, Thank you all for all of the kind and supportive words, they are greatly appreciated!
     
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