Black Poetry : Neva Been (pt. 1)

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  1. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Neva Been (pt. 1)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    neva been ......101 i hear ya bruh !
     
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    Whew... Well, the word play alone is reason to give you applause for this piece. But the main reason I stand up and cheer, is because this one really touched me poet. Such a pure love expressed for a woman here...wow.
     
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    now this was awesome....i enjoyed this flow...keep on flowing my Brother
     
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    Wow.. im sad and fluttered at the same time..
    i love the chemistry of your words..
    Drizzle..
    theres a better tomorrow.
    I know ur blue @ times.. but lets make purple!:luvu:
     
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    Oh My....is all I can say BSD!!!!!
     
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    Thanx for stopping thru, Rich!

    Peace!
     
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    Ok..I am so humbled right now...Thanx for feeling this

    Peace!
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Angel...I watched and learned from the best..You are great poet. Maybe a lil of ya stuff is rubbing off on me...Thanx for the luv, Ma!

    Peace!
     
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    My PoeticManifesta Angel...Thanx for reading and feeling this piece. I had to let it out but I didn't wanna make ya sad. Let me be sad while u stay vibrant and silly and all the good stuff..Thanx again for showing luv!

    PS...Let's make it....Holla!

    Peace!
     
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