Black Poetry : Neo-Soul

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by phenomenalwoman, Aug 4, 2006.

  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Candlelight
    Dimmed room
    The strumming of your guitar catering
    To the quiet inviting ambiance
    That is me and you
    For a moment our eyes make contact
    And you linger on the whisper of my breath

    I breathe in your melodic rhythm
    Welcoming fond memories of past conversations
    by phone
    Ohh...the strum of your guitar
    Takes me on a journey
    And for a moment yesterday returns
    The young me...
    The young you...

    Remains in that moment of time
    What should have been...
    What could have been...
    Ahh hell
    No regrets
    This IS our moment in time
    I'll catch you after the next set.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all eyes watching this was smooth
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Phenomenal, I am loving this piece. Your words set the mood, made me think back to a time, when the love was clear, and he was near. Your pen must be smokin, this was warm and smooth, probably would sound great spoken too. Flow on with your poetic self!
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich, you always have my back!

    And thank you Watz, I'm sure you know how it is to get to reminiscing, that in itself sets the mood.
     
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    Wow, I almost missed this. I'm feeling the vibe on this I could almost see this situation going down!
     
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