Black Poetry : Neegro Pleeze (repost for GP)

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    neegro pleeze
    she got up at seven
    you got up at eleven
    off to work she went
    to pay the rent
    you just lay there
    sexually spent

    neegro pleeze
    you live a life of ease
    home all day
    playing hip-hop promoter
    on the cell phone
    having so much fun
    but your concert list
    doesn't have one

    neegro pleeze
    you should be on your knees
    thanking God up above
    for a woman who knows nothing but love

    but on her shoulders
    sits a beautiful head
    too bad you don't know
    her brain is quite sharp
    letting her see things
    blind to her heart

    neegro pleeze
    you think she don't know
    bout your trifflin' ways
    and your 18 year old ho
    you think you got it made
    you think your life is sweet
    very soon my worthless brother
    your *** will be on the street
    finally forced to do for yourself
    then her beautiful love
    can be appreciated
    by someone else

    neegro pleeze
    you'll be in the wind
    like the blowing breeze
    bet you're wondering
    how I know
    very late last night
    the woman you disrespect
    told me so

    BE
    (c) 2000
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man that was deep
    lovin the flow
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    definitely diggin dis!
    you hit the nail on the head...
    thanks for sharing.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  4. SistaMoon

    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was cool, luv the concept.
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pleeeeze!

    Puleeeze--this was good the first tie and it is even better--I especially liked the still lying in bed after the moment has passed--with no job and no place to go--heard this story and seen it--well done--Amun-Ra :)
     
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