Black Poetry : Need

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Legacy21, Oct 19, 2002.

  1. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words caress my ears tenderly
    Silently sliding slowly down my spine
    I shiver with your whispered promises
    Of cerebral ecstasy
    How wide can you expand my mind?
    Illuminate my third eye?
    With the truth of your soul
    Spit those word to me like real hip hop
    Make my heart thunder like boom box beats
    Give it to me raw and bring the heat
    I want to believe in you
    So lace me luxuriously with your lyricism
    Make me taste your love on the tip of my tongue
    Make my pen bleed tears
    For every pronounced pain pondered onto paper
    Split my soul in two
    With your double edged metaphors
    Rally me to your cause
    In the name of your words I will declare war
    I will be the Isis you speak of
    I will be the Queen you need
    I’ll even be that ***** that did you wrong
    When I hear those sad songs of love gone
    Just slam me with the waves of your words
    Wash my spirit in soliloquies
    Show me your naked need
    To have me hear you
    To feel you
    Penetrate my thoughts
    Make me plead for mercy
    Because your words feel so **** good
    Sink your similes in to my jugular vein
    Drain me until your hunger is satisfied
    Dance me across velvet skies
    Where your words are crushed diamonds scattered across my soul
    Make me smile like the sunrise
    Make me cry the Nile for you
    Make my laughter into butterflies and rainbows
    Make my sleep tortured
    Make me fantasize
    Make me sigh with wistfulness
    Make me remember
    Make me forget
    Mold me, hold me, break me, and forsake me
    But baby, please, please don’t put down that pen
    Cause your words are love and sin
    And I can’t begin to tell you where this desire ends
    It consumes me with a deep burning fire
    It is my life’s blood
    I need your words, the pen, and paper
    Like I need water
    Like I need oxygen
    Like I need you
    Like I need this poetry to never, ever stop
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed given all
    as i hear ya beckon call
    raw 2 da beat
    poetic lyric ever so sweet
    to cast a spell
    as it dwell in da temple
    of ya mind
    relax unwined
    get ready to feast
    on a poetry treat
    da words of flow
    is love u know
    in a twisted sin
    from da hand da pen

    keep da flava flowin'
     
  3. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was truly sensational, anyone who has a passion for words can feel this piece.
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang poet i felt this here
    this was so deep on a level beyond visual sight

    you speak with the voice

    DSS
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    this was tight!

    especially this part "I’ll even be that ***** that did you wrong
    When I hear those sad songs of love gone
    Just slam me with the waves of your words "

    you go :)

    pd
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone.
     
  7. elayne.

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    legacy.


    okay!! :) ...this is tyght:
    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Need...

    I felt it soul-deep!
    Poetry is some straight up dope!


    Your words are on fire here and you dropped them like its HOT!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    i remember this one miss this sister scribing
     
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    GOOD GOOGA-MOO! lol



    This was INCREDIBLE!

    And, shoots!....If YOUR pen and HIS pen get together, we may not be able to handle it!

    Seriously, your descriptive language in this is AWESOME!

    This poem was INTENSE!......just SICK!









    And :birthday:
     
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