Black Poetry : Need to Write

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 24, 2007.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Forgot what I was going to say
    I was just getting ready to loose the thoughts that plague my mind
    To set them free
    To hear me
    Yet to enjoy the realisms of thought
    To be one with the realities that are self-taught

    Glad to be in a solitude for a moment
    Then something goes on and its hard to own it
    Keep flowin
    There is a flow
    Need to write
    For my artwork is intensely simmering
    To convey that I am not alone, we are not our own
    Just to let go
    That's what you do when you're in prison

    To ponder the concreteness of now
    The reality will leave you upside down

    To feel people
    To feel grace
    To engulf my senses
    In the surrealness of lifes blisses
    To enjoy the here and now
    Every moment
    To wonder
    To wonder
    To wonder

    I equally drift into heavens paradise of splendor
    Only to remember
    Wow!, This feels so nice!

    Classic and vintage
    Black and white
    Jazzy Image
    The things of this life are but memories floating by
    Way high up to the sky
    Life is only what you make of it
    Don't let the bad change you
    Enjoy being free
    I enjoy being me
    I think it is

    I need to write

    Desert Storm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, it's those thoughts that lie right on the tip of your tongue, yet when you want to pen them the exact words are gone, but theose feelings...they remain. Great scribe, you captured that feeling of free flowing thoughts that just have to be captured.
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its funny how things like that happen.

    Thanks,

    DS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    trust me we all cross this and words vanish under da ink
     
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    Hey Desert Storm
    And just set the mind free. That is what I’m feeling here
    In your poem. Just to write, and to feel the peace of your
    Thought during a time of solitude even if it's just for a moment
    your pen is flowing, and it's wonderful. It does feel good and your drop
    Is good, I can feel the excitement building with a blast And I'm just enjoying it.
    Yes so very nice. Feeling the flow. Flow

    Peace~N~Love
     
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