Black Poetry : Need a Break - a quick write

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Jun 15, 2011.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need a break
    from the work and the kids
    from the haggles of this biz
    from my thoughts and my words
    and the struggle to just endure
    I need a break
    I'm not complaining or facsinating
    but hot **** theres no creating
    no time to unwind, to get blind
    always thkning bout this world i designed
    yet i would never rewind time
    i just need a break
    a time to think bout the next hot mess
    the next big life stress
    the thoughts id like to repress
    but, at the end, i always acquiesce
    I need a break
    a hot minute to run free
    to break away from me
    to let someone else referee
    the drama hanging from my family tree
    i just need a break
     
  2. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel U!
    Now breaking FREE:)
     
  3. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know all about needing a break. ALL about it. Sometimes it gets hectic. Hope you get that break! Stay Positive.
     
  4. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this, deeply. from time to time, we all need that break...need to feel liberated from our burden, our anguish, our SELF...before we can resume life's struggle.

    stay strong.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I feel ya this i know so well needing a break whewwww!!!!
     
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